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Thursday 31 May 2018

Monster land

MONSTER LAND Image result for monster inc


When the sky is pitch black and the stars are shining bright, all the kids of the world are
sleeping on their cozy beds except one.


Everynight, Michael Jackson crawls under his bed and says hi to his monster. His monster is called
Derek, and the colour of his soft fur on top of his harsh skin is a peaceful blue and a wild purple.
Derek’s claws are horrifyingly long and dark. He has sets of yellow sharp teeth in his mouth. He growls
powerful and head splitting if you get on his bad side. But something that makes him special and is Derek’s
personal favourite thing about him is his incredible personality.


Together they use Derek’s monster magic and vanish into the lovely world of monster land.
Monster land is an unbelievable place, everything their screams out the word “FUN”. There’s bouncy
balls, monstrous trampolines, crazy swings, thunderous deep laughter, extreme roller coasters and
many more. This whole place is an awesome fair.


Today, Derek and Michael are going to go to the bookstore to get a book to read tonight. After scanning
through many outrageous monster books, they found the perfect book. This book was called The
Friendly Monster, there was many different stories about friendly monsters but this one stood out. It
was special because the author was Jake, Him and Michael were fellow friends and the monster in the
story was best friends with mine.

That night. Michael was safely in his bed, tugging on his blanket that was as soft as rose petals.
Underneath his blue bed there was an amazing monster reading a story with his deep voice.
Derek couldn’t be any more happier he thought as they both dosed off to sleep.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Rose!!! This is an amazing piece of writing. It is very descriptive and I love the way your story was structured. Keep up the good work!

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